There's hope yet...
A little too crudely put together and in a style that isn't original anymore. You need to develop your style a little, perhaps get more detail and change the idea of it into something new and exciting, if possible.
There's hope yet...
A little too crudely put together and in a style that isn't original anymore. You need to develop your style a little, perhaps get more detail and change the idea of it into something new and exciting, if possible.
Promising
It's a shame this doesn't have an effective story, there is some really good flash here. The animation is a little "choppy" as said, but i'm not sure about time periods and size where the text is concerned. A good effort, and definitely one to be kept up.
PS. If this is a rough draft, can i mention you spelled "summary" wrong without sounding too pedantic?
Exquisite
Graphical violence at its very best. Cross rayman-esque figures with Xiao Xiao type violence and you have the basics of this sure-to-be flash masterpiece. A must see!
So there you have it...
Age 38, Male
UK
Joined on 11/29/00